mizz-iceberg

This was very well written and was beautiful. Good word usage and flow of words. But nothing new. We've all heard this before. I'm not saying its a topic that ...

Your piece on peace is well-written. corny humor... This is all well written but I have to say I disagree with your meaning of Peace. I believe, to find peace ...

Wow this is really beautiful!! When I read 'She invites me to her' I wasn't thinking mother, i was thinking more like bed partner. Lol. But yes later on my ...

Hello there! Great story you've got here. I hope you win the contest and you probably can, but there are a few things that I think you should fix before ...

Wow that's a really beautiful piece you've written here. I like these kind of stories. I agree with Azila, this piece probably belongs in the romantic fiction section. See if ...

Hey there Jabber! You definitely have hope in poetry! I liked this poem. It had great rhythm and also read very well. Great imagery. My favourite part was: No longer ...

I totally agree with KJ. I was really confused what was going on at the beginning and kept scanning the sentences, thinking I had misread or missed something. I think ...

Good job! I agree with gryphon that the topic is a little overused but the poem was intriguing. However i did find it a little stretched. Like you repeated a ...

Yes i like the metaphor! It was rather cute and funny. Good use of words and description. I liked the feel and mood of this poem. And i can see ...

I loved the way you wrote this. And i liked your view on life. Also, I can see why you left out the names of the characters. Names weren't needed. ...

First of great imagery. And you brought out the emotions very well. The kinks: the wind howl's at the mid-night moon as if you are still here. The rain patters ...

great! please continue!! I have a passion for different versions of fairy tales. and people above have pretty much pointed out the mistakes. And yes it's true giving birth to ...

Like Loose said, Wow. I loved it. I was sorta surprised towards the ending but I liked it. I rather enjoyed the story Weaver's grandfather told about the war. Characters, ...

I didn't get too fond of. I could almost guess the ending. Yes it's rather cliche but keep writing because your style is catching. Though I can guess how everything's ...

Yes it doesn't make sense but its giving the reader an idea. It may not be logical....but it makes sense. Lol. Hard explain what I'm trying to say here. Like ...