miyaviloves

I do have more but i didnt want to post it all in one go as it is quite long, i also left out the prologue which needs to be ...

Well i wanna read more! It seems to be the beginning of a very interesting story. Post more!

This is a really good poem, but made me feel kinda...empty? Your writing is very similar to my friends, its quite a unique style however and your very talented!

Aww thats really sad, but i really like this, its simple yet effective, well done i hope to see more!

This is a very good story although i ofund it quite sad, kids even teenagers can be so cruel, i like the style you write with, is there goijng to ...

A really cute story i liked it alot, although i do agree with other comments that the ending could use some work but other than that well done a very ...

this is very good as you said you only wrote this when you were 12! i really like your style of writing, could you PM a link to some more ...