miyaviloves

i liked seeing Jamiy stand up for herself here, Just anxious to see what happens next. I must admit I got a bit behind with it but I catching up ...

I agree with Liz this was pretty good! you know as well as i that battlefields become soldiers' graves, and everyone is always as pathetic as they think they are. ...

i have to agree with Liz about this. And just a word of advice, if people have taken the time to read your work its good for them to leave ...

On the outskirts to a small town there was a fire. The family was trapped inside and there was no way to calm the blaze. It seemed as if it ...

I'm gonna crit this as i read it yay! so here i go :D Millions. They say the old man was worth that much It said so on his bank ...

Ok, first things first I did like this, but found it a little too hard to read. The hearts of the Lifeless Ones the only prize worth contending for in ...

Always and forever, you promised I'd be yours The opening line is a little cliché, i mean for an opening sentence you should really grab the attention of the reader, ...

Noo you cant leave it there! I'm running out of wrods to say how much i really like POD, i will make sure to look out for #18 I'm guessing ...

Ok I really liked this, its emotional and you have kept it original, Only thing I didn't like was: Send nausea to my every curve. Wring my tears to pool. ...

Noo it stopped, i wanted to see what happened when she got back! Like i said before she wasn't free and well, she really isn't in this one, emotional and ...

I liked this, but I dont think she is finally free, I think that she is not free atall now lol, might just be my take on it. I think ...

One of many had hair flaming an electric blue ran from his friends who had their eyes intently set on the foot ball in the flame boys hands. When i ...

this one made me laugh: “You're not here to make out with me either, why are you here?” I kinda like the jokes, it make it a bit more lighter ...

Whenever she got a burst of inspiration, another idea, or when something potentially life changing happened she would write it down, to keep from getting lost in the labyrinth that ...

hello I'm here to review yay! Do I not make him happy?" You forgot the speech marks at the beginning here. Because no matter what I do to them, she ...