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This is a nice start you've got here. I'll admit that I wasn't a huge fan at first, but it got better as I read more. Also, I'm super interested ...

I'm going to come out at say that I'm not too advanced in poetry, so apologies if I criticize any choices you made for poetic reasons I don't understand. I ...

Wow! I'm jealous of your imagination, as you've managed to create a beautiful little world in this piece. I liked how there were small details in the story that made ...

I'm a big fan of dystopian and futuristic stories, and the idea you're working with here is definitely interesting. Like Vari mentioned in the review before me, there are several ...