missunderstood

It's like, I've had this epiphany -- Everything is clear. About the dead, the empty, the spent. About our greatest fear. We walk through this world, Facing struggles every next ...

I look up to the clouds, The suns embers begin to die. I see their gentle, wispy grey. Soft swirls of silver sing in the sky. I look up high ...

Press your ear firmly against these waves, I don't understand this line and hear a miracle you fail to see on busy days. This magnificent creation of man, I love ...

Wow. That was amazing. I really like this. Although Im a bit confused on her intelligence. She seems to have a large vocabulary for a 4 and 5 year old. ...

there was this dog how was married and two kids one day the two kid dogs ran in frant of the car and dired two mouths later his wife dired ...

I am not sure if you meant to use the word sky twice, but it would not have been my choice. The poem is gloomy and dark, obviously. It did ...

I am sure we can all relate to this. Nice use of literary devices (especially personification). I am awful with grammar, so I won't be much help there. I think ...

Overall, I liked this poem. I'm sure most people can relate to the fear of the dark. As a child I was terrified. It captured the the readers imagination. Nice ...

I liked the title and the poem. Its well written. Yet, I think you should have a little bit more use of vocabulary. (I can barely use correct grammar so ...

I like the way you review movies. You are slightly comical, especially when you point out the obvious. You're blunt and to the point and it helps see a clearer ...

I really enjoyed reading the prologue. I think it catches the reader's attention. The character is also interesting. I think that more colorful language could help it a lot. Some ...