misstoria

I loved the first line! The way you grabbed the attention and brought in down on that one word (LIAR). You brought all the emotion into hate, which played well ...

I really loved the way the progressions made sense. When you made a statement, it easily worked into the other. I love this poem and it's simplicity. Keep up the ...

I love the way it actually speaks to you when you read it. This really does belong in lyric form and in that form this could be really amazing. If ...

I so agree with all of the comments. This piece has be really confusing me with wether or not is should be a song, and why it begins the way ...