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I adore this piece it has a very open and honest feel to it. It has great flow to it. My only critique is the line "stronger. And that time ...

When I read the beginning I thought of the new movie Warm bodies, then I got to the end and laughed.

I adore this piece! I really enjoyed the topic and subject matter. I think that you should just leave the 5th stanza alone, it seems like changing tense is necessary ...

Thanks!!!

I adore this piece! I think that sometimes shorter poems are much more effective then longer poems. I really enjoyed how simplistic but effective this is. I enjoyed that you ...

I adore this piece! I think that sometimes shorter poems are much more effective then longer poems. I really enjoyed how simplistic but effective this is. I enjoyed that you ...

I quite enjoyed this piece. It seems really heartfelt and beautiful. I do suggest that you change the line "I love you one and then". That line just seems to ...

As some insight let me explain what i was expressing in this poem. This piece was written in a very bad time in my life when I lost my best ...

I quite enjoyed this piece, I love poems that rhyme. Roaring waves told the tale of the deep, O’er the grave where sailors sleep. The Swede’s fear showed; sweat wet ...

I very much enjoyed this poem, it is completely true. Poetry is about writing what you want to, and having fun with it. This poem really spoke the truth. Keep ...

I really liked this! Your word choice was quite impeccable. I quite enjoy the every line rhymes, it gae it a very whimsy feel. The over all mood of this ...

I personally quite liked this piece, yes it was of unusual format, but the point was there. Do not let some opinions get you down, keep writing !!!

This was actually wrote for a poetry contest. It is meant to summarize the song Hurt by Johnny Cash. The dark parts of poem are actually very real in the ...

This is a great piece I just feel that can be choppy in parts. It makes sense, but it can be hard to put together. i recomened you re-read it ...

This was a very good piece. The second person prespective made it stand out, and have a different feel. The beginning convinced you to read it, which is what a ...