misschavoshi

hi dear first of all the part''enforced mass'' i think it doesnt come to the context.u know i expected a more literary expression. it is a strong text.i mean strong ...

hi dear! i think it is a good try to write a lyric and sing it.the music in the soundcloud is great.i love it.but the rhythm of the lyric doesn't ...

hi dear! it is actually a song that rises me is so heroic and epic,although it's not so professional. you has repeated a lot and repeating the ''dear one'' is ...

hi dear i think verse 2 is the best part of this poem because of its meaning and because i could get to the rhythm of it more than other ...

hi. the picture is a great way to make the mind map of the readers.the story is simple, just like a page of a diary.but it is a good simple.which ...

I should say it is a good try and a good subject. U know I find it kinda simple. I mean it says all the feelings clearly and leaves nothing ...