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Re: Fickle
cool......i loved it!
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: Don't Look Back
cool
Aug 28, 2007 -
Re: The Black Widow Cliche
this is really good! i didn't think i'd like it so much. this is brilliant! fantastic!
May 11, 2007 -
Re: You Hate Me
thats really good! i'm a bad critique so i wont comment on anythin apart from the fact that i liked it!
May 10, 2007 -
Re: She (or the Whore of Hell)
wow! i really like this poem! thats really VERY good!
Apr 14, 2007 -
Re: the darkness
i think you meant "it hides through out the day" and perhaps you could change "my sweet lady friend" to "my fair lady" i know its much shorter but its ...
Apr 14, 2007 -
Re: Husband and Wife.
o_0
Apr 14, 2007 -
Re: Somewhere Only We Know
hey that was real good! cant wait for the second chapter, please do private message me and let me know when you post it as i dont always visit this ...
Apr 12, 2007 -
Re: Untitled (screenplay)
wow that was really good!
Apr 9, 2007 -
Re: Hero
nice! keep writing!
Apr 9, 2007 -
Re: The Trial of Aryuna - Chapter 1
cool, you really got me going and it aint easy to make me read on. keep writing, i'm waiting for chapter 2 :)
Apr 9, 2007