mikelancaster

i have to say that jealousy is a hard subject to tackle and i think you have something here, its a little wordy but thats not really a problem. go ...

i think this might make more sense if you punctuate it?

good work *thumbs up* my only advise would be to be a little more precise with your wording if you do you could write some fantastic stuff

thats an interesting one, ive never heard the song its based upon but none the less i like it the smaller sections have a good ring to them maybe the ...