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Thanks for the review, Ankhirke! I'm glad you liked the prologue despite the length. Also, late or early, doesn't matter much to me. I'm just happy to get a review. ...

Thanks for the review Esme. Long, but helpful. First, considering when he gets his powers, I understand what you're saying, and I'll alter how it went down. But for the ...

Okay, I'm back. “You’re lucky my friend knows a thing or two about bikes. That thing–” “You sold it?” I shrieked. “You sold my Buell 1125CR?” How did she realize ...

Thanks for your review ankhirke. I'll try and fix those things in due time, but for now I can't (it's 11:15 and I've got summer school tomorrow). You're doing a ...

My legs and arms twisted around painfully as I rolled, getting caught in random branches. Don't use the word "random". It's a word that's descriptive, but at the same time, ...

By the way, your review wasn't too repetitive at all of what others have already mentioned about this piece, but it's just as helpful! Ah, good. That's usually the reason ...

I'm glad you both enjoyed it! Pandapez: I edited according to what you said and will continue watching for repetitions in my writing. I've been told such things before, but ...

Thanks for the reviews so far, and Blink, yours was especially helpful, so thank you. Okay, First, about the ending. Maybe I will just end it here. I was considering ...

I can't give you much of a review right now (homework, gotta love it) but there's one thing.... What happened to his friend. I did mention when he left, as ...

This was part two, but just to make things easier, I recently put both parts in the first post.

Thanks for the reviews so far. I've fixed the ma'am thing (I always forget that one...). I'm glad you all liked it, and the next part should be up before ...

Also, to your last comment, about me calling them all male/female vampyres? In the next chapters, I reveal that vampyres aren't the only creatures that live in Lugosi. I actually ...

I guess your right, Face Engine. I just automatically assumed not many people would know about those places and names, but hey, from my neck of the woods it's unknown. ...

Wow, you just made my day. It was so random, but in a good way. WHY ARE WE YELLING? WE'RE NOT. WE'RE JUST TALKING IN CAPITAL LETTERS. That has to ...

Actually, I thought Nic was a girl at first (i don't remember why, though... Something in your writing), but I have a guy cousin named Nick, so I guess anything ...