midnightpoet21

I really loved what you wrote. I believe in many of those and it's nice to see that others do too. If love gave you wings, would you always want ...

This poem was just amazing. I've always thought about suicide from the perspective of the person killing themselves, never from their family's or friends' point of few. It's harsh and ...

All of your questions will be answered in more detail in the next chapter(hopefully), but here are the short answers. 1. She knows his address, he doesn't know hers because ...

This was so adorable. I agree that the climax with the fox could've been more suspenseful, but all in all it was a great read. -midnight.

This is a beautiful poem, I couldn't really see anything wrong with it. I adored your wording, especially in the third stanza. After reading this I think I'll go read ...

I really liked this, it made me giggle even though I'm not exactly sure why. Idraax already covered the only things I could think of that was wrong. Keep up ...

This is just a little confusing, but I like it anyway. I'm kind of not sure what exactly is going on. Why is she in the water, where did he ...

There we go, I've fixed it. I didn't realize that the tab key hadn't indented.

I'll continue with this as soon as my writer's block disappears again. It'll be gone once I'm out of this odd mood, which should be in a day or two. ...