midnighteardrops

Thanks for all the comments, as you all can tell spelling and grammar aren't my strong points :s Most of my post's aren't that great so i appreciate all suggestions ...

Thanks to all for the reviews. I've never really had anyone read any of my poems, and I'm really enjoying the feedback. The puddles thing was a complete mistake, and ...

Thanks for the feedback, I'll work on the 'emo' part. I definitely don't want to sound whinny.:) Anyone eles want to help me it seems kind of off and i ...

Really good! You should think about maybe making the song a little longer. You have talent keep workng on it!!