User avatar

midnightblack

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Slept Alone

    well this poem is very interesting i think i can picture what you mean the thing your trying to express it has to do with pain and sorrow but i ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Moonboy

    He picked up a leaf and held it in the air. Little bugs were crawling. The first thing to mention is that this poem is very original and beautiful so ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Of Melody and Death

    Her death is vomit as she sings The wind knows her song all too well Calls out to dance a lovely spell Her husband marches to the beat Their love ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: When We First Met

    Its short and sweet the first thing i noticed was this seems like first love. When u learn how to play with fire. If you can make it a little ...

    Nov 30, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Standing alone

    very true poem its true it comes from that part of the heart that knows it isnt being treated right by everyone else and the situation is common the thing ...

    Nov 30, 2010


Life is the art of drawing sufficient conclusions from insufficient premises.
— Samuel Butler