michellel96

I really liked this a lot so yayz for you :) I was fifteen again, bouncing along the back roads to the beach in our puke-green Suburban. Against Dad’s better ...

NO really, this isn't half-bad. I mean, not the best poem I've ever read, but you're on the way! Couple of suggestions, but otherwise, not bad for your first poem. ...

Hi! Me again. this was good, a bit mind-boggling but good in all. It was kind of as if it were in a code that only some people can understand. ...

That was... strangely unique. I didn't quite get it. The description of each of your topics was pretty much complete and valid. That's good. I mean, describing something so complex ...

That was pretty good. Well, first of all, I have something I'd like to say. ONE: I like how the "section" doesn't give to much information about anything. You know ...

I luv this! It's so, mysterious and exotic! So...Wonderous! It's really hard to put it in words but it so strange! No, not strange, UNIQUE! I really paints a vivid ...

I agree! It was very depressing. but it shows strong "moody-ness" and it's pretty much focused. It did bounced from idea to idea a little. I liked your song. because ...

OMG! well, i only read a part. This was pretty good. Washing your hair in the toilet shows humor but seriously, that it kinda gross. it's not necessary to take ...

This was really interesting! I agree, paragraphs and breaks are good to use so it doesn't just seem like a big jumble of words. I couldn't read all of it ...