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michaeld

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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Winter's love.

    You have so much talent and it definitely, definitely shows in this piece! I couldn't keep my eyes off of this beautiful creation! The way you had the separate poem ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Garage Girl - chapter un

    This, simply put, was phenomenal. You definitely need to keep this up! I loved the word choice and the whole piece flowed perfectly, which most authors, including I, envy quite ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Prelude & Fugue No. 18

    This was a beautifully written, amazing piece of work! You should be proud! I think that the word choice was just right, no grammar mistakes that I could see, but ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Days I Consider Atheism

    This was a beautiful, beautiful piece. I enjoyed every moment of reading it! I really liked this one quote. It sent chills down my spine. if there is no Love, ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: That's So Gay!

    I think that this was an amazing poem! It definitely has a lot of potential. I don't think you need to do anything different with it, it's perfect the way ...

    Dec 9, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Fill-out form for access to Heaven.

    This was hilarious, witty, amazing and I would have never thought of it! I've read books with similar ideas and they were pretty much this, but much longer! What was ...

    Dec 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deleted 21

    This poem was amazing! I read it over and over and over and loved it even more every time I read it again! I even read it to my mum ...

    Oct 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I

    Ok this will be really short. First of all, I really loved this work! This was quite fantastic! The second thing that I have to say is that I love ...

    Oct 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Black Box

    This poem was AMAZING! You definitely get my "like"! I don't have ANYTHING to say about the story itself, I just have a few grammatical errors :) Here we go! ...

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Woman at the Well

    First of all, this was simply astounding! I love this piece so much it's not even funny! I love it so much, I think I killed it with my love! ...

    Oct 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: a frozen window pane

    I absolutely adored this piece! I'm speechless! Now onto the nitpicky-ness xD I’m the breath scratching the surface I think you should bring the rest of the phrase up making ...

    Oct 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Puzzle

    I loved this poem so much! Your poetry is indescribable and I look up to your writing skills! You are very, very, very talented! Now back to this poem :P ...

    Oct 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I'll Lie

    This was beautiful! I loved every word of it! I did find a few nit picky things though You're too innocent, I so often think I don't know why; Must ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Folded Up

    Simply put; I'm speechless. Your imagery is just fantastic! I loved your descriptive words especially. Most people have either not enough description, causing the story to feel flat, or they ...

    Sep 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Saxophones in Fall

    First of all, I would like to say that this poem was, simply put, amazing! I loved the description and the word choice was phenomenal! Jasmine perfumes the woolly foreboding ...

    Sep 25, 2011


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