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Re: Winter's love.
You have so much talent and it definitely, definitely shows in this piece! I couldn't keep my eyes off of this beautiful creation! The way you had the separate poem ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: The Garage Girl - chapter un
This, simply put, was phenomenal. You definitely need to keep this up! I loved the word choice and the whole piece flowed perfectly, which most authors, including I, envy quite ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Prelude & Fugue No. 18
This was a beautifully written, amazing piece of work! You should be proud! I think that the word choice was just right, no grammar mistakes that I could see, but ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Days I Consider Atheism
This was a beautiful, beautiful piece. I enjoyed every moment of reading it! I really liked this one quote. It sent chills down my spine. if there is no Love, ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: That's So Gay!
I think that this was an amazing poem! It definitely has a lot of potential. I don't think you need to do anything different with it, it's perfect the way ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Fill-out form for access to Heaven.
This was hilarious, witty, amazing and I would have never thought of it! I've read books with similar ideas and they were pretty much this, but much longer! What was ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Deleted 21
This poem was amazing! I read it over and over and over and loved it even more every time I read it again! I even read it to my mum ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: I
Ok this will be really short. First of all, I really loved this work! This was quite fantastic! The second thing that I have to say is that I love ...
Oct 27, 2011 -
Re: Black Box
This poem was AMAZING! You definitely get my "like"! I don't have ANYTHING to say about the story itself, I just have a few grammatical errors :) Here we go! ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: The Woman at the Well
First of all, this was simply astounding! I love this piece so much it's not even funny! I love it so much, I think I killed it with my love! ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: a frozen window pane
I absolutely adored this piece! I'm speechless! Now onto the nitpicky-ness xD I’m the breath scratching the surface I think you should bring the rest of the phrase up making ...
Oct 4, 2011 -
Re: The Puzzle
I loved this poem so much! Your poetry is indescribable and I look up to your writing skills! You are very, very, very talented! Now back to this poem :P ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: I'll Lie
This was beautiful! I loved every word of it! I did find a few nit picky things though You're too innocent, I so often think I don't know why; Must ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Folded Up
Simply put; I'm speechless. Your imagery is just fantastic! I loved your descriptive words especially. Most people have either not enough description, causing the story to feel flat, or they ...
Sep 28, 2011 -
Re: Saxophones in Fall
First of all, I would like to say that this poem was, simply put, amazing! I loved the description and the word choice was phenomenal! Jasmine perfumes the woolly foreboding ...
Sep 25, 2011
