metrophobia

I like the imagery you've got! And I think the "centered" worked for the poem too, as it somewhat mimicked the look of the sun going down. Not a fan ...

At first I thought maybe this was about a relationship with a car or vehicle based on the asphalt line. Then as the poem went on, I questioned that. I ...

"the title for this is at the end" is a sweet title on its own actually! I liked this poem because it flipped expectations and that's exactly what good poems ...