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Re: A Game of Wits
Space, you really are being a little brutal. 'You need to spell better'? Excuse me sir, but I believe you do. I liked it, I thought you were explaining a ...
Mon May 19, 2008 3:18 pm -
Re: School Trip part 2
Enzoguy15 Very good. Enzoguy15, try a more constructive reply please, read the rules before posting. As for you Cauan, there are a few problems; -- "Fine, I'll go and do ...
Thu May 15, 2008 3:20 pm -
Re: Seedpaw's Fight
Quite a bit of action. But it all happens so suddenly, you described a 'long' fight in 3 lines. Describe the fight a bit more. Maybe; I whipped my paws ...
Tue May 13, 2008 3:09 pm -
Re: Star Wars
First review, so here goes. Good idea you have there, though lacking in imagery. Its good to leave a little to the readers imagination, but this is a little much. ...
Tue May 13, 2008 2:53 pm