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This reads more like song lyrics to me than an actual poem. The informality of it all is what makes it read like this. They're very good song lyrics though. ...

This sounds like the ramblings of a crazy person, like it should be spoken instead of in text. I don't know what you're going for or if you achieved it, ...

Hmm...I'm confused. So you mean adverbs AND adjectives? I do use a lot of adverbs and adjectives in my writing, because I adore them. It IS quite a problem. I've ...

You messed it up. The repetition of a certain word adds a poetic element to the story. The run-on sentences are part of the metaphor; it aptly captures his sense ...

I am DEFINITELY a tragic victim of junioritis. Lord help me. Thank god junior year is OVER.

I don't think you guys fully understand this poem. Have you ever heard of the Beat Generation's key masterpiece "Howl" by Allen Ginsberg? This poem was an English assignment meant ...