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Thanks for reading Araidne and sunshine girl.. but it would be useful to know specifics. Thanks for taking the time anyway.

The way you have to work out what the hidden message spells takes some time and you have to work it out and separate the words--- this reminds me of ...

I'd rather let the reader guess what it's about than telling them. everybody can interpret words differently so it should just be how you interpret it, not how you're told ...

Have you ever seen/read Samuel Beckett's "Not I"? . If you haven't, try to; this reminds me of it.

haha, you really are stalking me /SOPHIE/; Ben Folds does rock though.

I think it is repetitive because it's a song? As in, there is a chorus which you repeat... correct me if I'm wrong.

Just wanted to say that I love the first four lines of this poem, they are truly original . the way 'Misery' is put on a line of its own- ...

Thankyou both for your critiques and suggestions. I knew i had overused the semicolon and the punctuation was quite awkward in places so thanks for helping me fix that. I've ...