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Thanks for the suggestions! I was thinking about doing something like "A Light in the Dark"

I'm not a huge fan of the title, so I'll take any suggestions. Also, I'm presenting this to my class sometime next week so any feedback is appreciated. Thanks!

Thank you! I am bad with commas but I believe you are right. I added those so thank you for pointing those out!

Wow. Very beautifully worded. The flow of this poem is great! I really liked the use of the italicized and bolded words to really emphasis certain words/phrases. This poem really ...

I don't know why it posted this and I don't know how to delete it. Sorry!

Thanks so much for the read and review! Yeah, that is a problem I have a lot. For some reason, I have a hard time identifying tense especially when I'm ...

Hi Katja! Thank you so much for your feedback! I am not a parent myself so it was a little challenging writing this in a realistic way. I wanted to ...