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Thank you. The part you mentioned, I was conflicted about. I was worried it was too ridiculous. I'll make the reasoning clearer in my next draft. :)

XP I think a comment in a different review made me think about it xP and made me question the vibes I had gotten so far and then made me ...

And the name is Meg's ;)

Thanks. I appreciate this review! However, I'm going to leave this link here . Check it out if you wish.

Thank you!

Um... Edit how? Do you want me to point out grammatical problems?

Hey Messenger, If you've ever looked at a pill bottle the numbers will often look like they do in this poem. Thanks for the review! :)

I've been playing around with allusions recently. I couldn't find a link anywhere, but the poem is called "Aspirin" by C.H. Knoblauch. in case of headache take two tablets every ...

I’ve been playing with allusions recently. There are a ton in here. Check out The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock by T.S. Eliot , The Road Not Taken by ...

No problem!

Yay~ I'm glad I could help. :)

Well, you could try talking more about the character's feelings on clean, white and square, rather than just "Yo, look at them white floors and walls and man, you'd think ...

Thanks for the review, @Magenta! In the temple names aren't used which is why the mother is never refered to by her name. The reader only knows Merin's because they ...

XD I thought they came from NaNo, but I wasn't sure.