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Hey, You held my interest with this story. I'm not sure what you want help with as you've done a good job with description so I'm just going to cover ...

Hey, This was sweet. As a christian, I think it means a lot, and the symbolism is great. Abel ran and lived. He lived because he ran and ran because ...

Hey, Thanks for reviewing my vampire story. I'm here to review your, and as I have trouble reviewing without being picky and rather annoying, I'm going to give you an ...

This was adorable, and it seemed like you had fun while you were writing it, which might be wrong, but I would have a blast. You might not want much ...

Hey, I'm here to give the review requested. I'm a little confused setting wise with the Sir Max and the palace, and the kind of modern terms, but I like ...

Hey Rascalover, Thanks for the request. Can I just say this is a great idea. I don't know why, but it makes the pregnancy of the woman more real when ...

Hey, Thanks for the request and sorry it's taken me a while to get to it. I've had a lot of projects lately. I was pulled into this chapter. You ...

Hey, Here I am finally. I'm sorry it took me so long. Thanks for the reviews. This is the first I've read of your novel, so I'm a bit lost, ...

Hey Kaf, First of all, as many people have said before me, your description was great. I love description, so this was right down my alley. Your grammar, as well, ...

Hey, I don't know much about poetry, so I can't give you any advice on format or rythm or anything of that nature. However, I had some questions about your ...

Hey, The other review caught most of your mistakes, and said a lot of the things I was going to say. It was good for a fable. You had the ...

Hey, I loved your voice. It made the story seem like everyone could connect. To me, your voice made your story. The end made me go "aww" but I think ...

Hey, I'm not a big fan of exerpts, but here we go. Owen's pretty good. The whole mean father that doesn't really love his son, kind of rubs me the ...

Hey, Your story was beautiful and odd at the same time. I'm just going to dive into the review now. Is love enough to keep us together when you are ...

Hey, Okay, I have no idea what chimera chick is, but I'd thought I'd help you out. For one, bad grammar is a pet peeve of many people here. Try ...