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Re: Indecisive Fate Ch.1
Hey~ I recognized the title from another review I did, and decided to just read all you have. I loved the characters in chapter two lets see how you introduce ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: The Year of the Scorpio - Chapter 3
Hello there Noelle~ The Powerpuff Girls
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Chapter Six of The Lost Legend - Selected Survival - Part two.
Oooh. A fellow east US-er to review~ Hey there Black, This is the first chapter I've read, so I may get confused and give weird advice. My apologizes if I ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: GemsWorld Quest Chapter 7: The jewel
Hello Tortwag, I haven't read any of the prior chapters, so forgive me if I get confused. Crystial was almost crying in place back then, but I reassured everyone saying ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Semi-conscious Reasoning (8. Making Amends)
Hey there Tronks, I haven't read any of the other chapters, so I may be lost. Ignore me if I'm blabbering, and blame it on me being lost ;) Oh ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity, Chapter Two
Shadster~ Funny seeing you here... It's not like we were talking about this or anything... So... It's been a while since I read Chapter 1, so if I sound lost... ...
Dec 26, 2013 -
Re: Indecisive Fate Ch.2
Hey there~ I want to start off by saying that this is the first chapter I've read, so if I say something ridiculous blame it on that. Otherwise, let's get ...
Dec 12, 2013 -
Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Season 2: Episode 8, End Of Shader Part 2 of 3
Hey there Dark~ I'm here to give you a review. This is the first piece of yours I'm going to read, so I don't have any background on your story. ...
Dec 12, 2013 -
Re: Honeymoon in Mars - Episode5(The Articus Voyage - Part1 - Fantastic Start)
Hey Rikki~ This is the first chapter of yours that I've read, so if I say something doesn't make sense, when you're sure it does, blame it on that fact. ...
Dec 8, 2013 -
Re: The Descent Chapter 10: The Kiss Part 2
I keep bothering you. :3 Hi~ I like how action-y this one was compared to your previous chapters which have really been all about character development. It was nice to ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: The Descent Chapter 10: The Kiss Part 1
Hello once more, You're chapter must've been stuck back here a long time. I only have one nitpick this time: I went to Pete’s house Since she doesn't put the ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: A Night to Remember - Chapter 6
Hey there Amethyst~ I haven't read any of the previous chapters, so if I say anything that's just really off, blame it on me having no prior knowledge of any ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: The Descent Chapter 9: Blood On My Hands Part 2
Hey~ So, I've shown up again. It's a shame you don't get more reviews. This is an interesting view of Mindy here. I'm going to jump into my nitpicks. So, ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: The Descent Chapter 9: Blood On My Hands Part 1
Hey~ I know I've reviewed a chapter of this before, but I don't remember which it was. As it is, I'm glad to see another one in need of a ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: The Charm of Deception, excerpt
Shadster Hola, amiga. So, I already told you how awesome this was, and I told you I'd give you a review, so I'm going to go ahead with the mean ...
Nov 24, 2013