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Re: I remember that one time...
Hey Katya~ Before I begin my review, I just want to let you know how to get rid of those pesky periods in between your stanzas with this short, easy ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Angelus Meus
Hey~ Welcome to YWS! I hope you're finding your way around the site well, and if not , feel free to ask me a question. Oh, that ending though! So ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Ill Fated Love- Chapter 3
Hey Blocked~ Belated welcome to YWS. I hope you're finding YWS easy to navigate. If not, shoot me a question anytime. I've read all of your chapters, so I'm pretty ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Memorial I: You Hold Their Memories
Hey there. I'm not a big fan of this poem. The first four stanzas are nice. I really like the imagery there. After that though, it kinda goes downhill for ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Necromancer's Reckoning: Chapter 5 and 6
Hey Guy~ I'm jumping right into this, starting with the negatives. For chapter five, I feel like the poison took effect way to quickly. The circulatory system just doesn't work ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Necromancer's Reckoning: Chapter 3 and 4
Hey Guy~ You have two really good followers. I'll see if I have anything to add. I'm going to save all the good stuff for the end this time :3 ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Villains (the begining)
Hey Sampson~ First, welcome to YWS. I hope you're finding things pretty easy to understand here. If not, please feel free to come to me for any questions. Second, while ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Memorial V: Greater Plans
Hey Wolf~ I love that you're writing about soldiers and Memorial Day. It's a great topic, and I don't think teens touch on it enough. So, my main issue with ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: 'The Necromancer's Reckoning' Chapter 1 and 2
Hey~ Alright. I'm going to leave another brief review. You've got two really long ones here. I'm really digging these Goulraths. They seem to be able to take the best ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Necromancer's Reckoning: Prologue
Hey Guy~ This is going to be short and to the point because most of the other reviewers have covered everything, but I have a few things to point out. ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: 1
Hey Ehtaniel! I think I recall having a conversation with you a while ago on chat. When I saw your chapter, I decided to stop in for a review. I ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Free
Hey Brunnera! I'm also someone who doesn't write much poetry, but sometimes nothing else will get those emotions out like a really nice poem to scrub out all the feelings ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Diakrino- The Darkness within (chapter 7)
Hey Gaurav~ I skimmed the other reviews. Forgive me if I repeat things. Henry is so creepy! I like it! XD I'm still a little skeptical of Phillip's and Mary's ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last Preveiw: Sir
Whoa, I'm actually here reading things that I said I would... Unheard of. It's a little depressing to see how far behind I am, but I'll catch up eventually, I ...
Jun 18, 2014 -
Re: Diakrino- The Darkness within (chapter 6)
You didn't update me D: The sadness. I'm glad I found this anyways :3 I skimmed over the reviews, and kinda skipped over the nitpicks because there were just so ...
Jun 18, 2014
