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Re: My Place or Yours? [Part 1]
Hey elves~ Sorry for the wait. I've been doing family things and being a good granddaughter before going to college xP So, the last (and first) time I was reviewing ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The Shifties Chapter 1 - Found - REVISED
Hey Nerd~ Phew, you have a lot of reviews. I'm sorry for the wait >.< I skimmed through your reviews, so I hope I don't repeat anything. Wow. You've made ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Don't Be Afraid To Be Who You Are (Chapter 1) *EDITED*
Hey Scott~ I don't think I reviewed your last draft of this chapter, so I'm not going to be able to compare it to the old version, but I'll tell ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Four
Hey nick~ Sorry for the wait. I really think your imagery is beautiful. I love the picture you paint in my head of a boy and a man standing on ...
Jul 23, 2014 -
Re: The Light Doesn't Shine Here
Hey round~ Here to drop a review as requested. You have a lot of reviews, so I apologize if I repeat something. I skimmed through them all, but sometimes you ...
Jul 8, 2014 -
Re: The Necromancer's Reckoning: Chapter 9 and 10
Hey Guy~ Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to this. I've been getting sidetracked with other things. >.> But I'm back, and ready to get at least ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: Love's Challenges
Hey don~ You have some gorgeous lines here. I think my favorite is: The closer I get the farther I am in love. It's simple, but it resounded with me. ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: Change yourself to change the world
Hey don~ Your essay reminds me of fables. It's really nice. I have a few things I think would improve this work though. First, I think you need an introduction ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: Denied: Chapter 1- Part 1
Hey Zo~ Ooh. This sounds really cool. I'm really intrigued by it. I'm just sad there isn't more right now. I see that it's only part one, but I wish ...
Jul 2, 2014 -
Re: A Porcelain Lullaby
Hey architect~ Welcome to YWS! I hope you're finding your way around just fine, but if you have any questions, just let me know. Since this piece is so big, ...
Jul 1, 2014 -
Re: Breeze
Hey Renard~ I've read a few of your other poems, and I've really enjoyed them. This one makes me smile. In your future, I see some reviews telling you to ...
Jul 1, 2014 -
Re: Remnants of You
Hey soph~ Welcome to YWS! I hope you're finding your way around easily enough, but if you have any questions about the site, feel free to ask me. Just to ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Noises At Night
Hey shik! Oh my goodness, this was beautiful. I love it so much! Your descriptions and imagery here were spot on. A few things though: This poem is one gigantic ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Copper
Hey len~ Quick belated welcome to YWS~ I hope you're finding your way around well, but if you have any questions, feel free to ask me. What a lovely poem. ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Cold Coffin
Hey Caerulean, I know this was written a long time ago and you've moved on to better things, but I'm going to give my two cents anyways :3 I was ...
Jun 30, 2014
