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Hey Sherri~ I'm going to go ahead and read this and tell you what I think then I'll go back and read the other two. I just wanted to let ...

Hey unpublished~ rumors and plans whispered in the pitch black, it would begin I love how you delved into who Sahlek is. His development as a character was beautiful. I'm ...

Oh my gosh, how adorable was this. So, yes the professional format for a script is centered, but it is a little distracting when coupled with how the text looks ...

Hey Stripes~ I'm really impressed with some of your lines. I think they're very nice. However, you've really got to work on your rhyme scheme. Trying to rhyme times and ...

Hey shine~ Oh dear. This is a very sad topic. :/ I think that a few of these lines actually speak a lot. The fact that the speaker in this ...

Hey Frost~ This is a nice song. I like the uplifting message. So I'm not going let them stop me Eep. This doesn't make sense. I think you're missing 'to' ...

Alright... Like Hannah, I'm a little confused, but I think that I understand a little more than she did. The speaker in this song was admiring a girl who got ...

Hey wolf~ I'm going for my elite eight challenges. The lyrics part is hard ;n; I'm going to give you the best review I can. I'm not a big Elton ...

Hey Kayta~ What a cute essay. I think it has a lot of potential My main issue is you kind of point out in your first paragraph that everyone can ...

Hey happy~ I appreciate your Watchmen avvie. It makes me happy to see. Okay, there are two things that will take your essay so much farther than it is: examples ...

Hey~ I haven't seen you around much recently ;n; I always told you I'd take a look at your stuff, and it's taken sooo long. I'm sorry xP Life and ...

Hey wind~ :o I might get a green room review in this review day after all~ I love that tea party scene. I think that's the best example of the ...

Hey~ The pacing in this chapter was much better than last chapter. I wish there was less narration though. There was so much narration that we kind of lost Morris' ...

Hey wind~ I'm here to review as requested. Sorry for the wait. I've skimmed through the other reviews. I hope to not repeat anything. Your language is beautiful. I just ...

Hey elves~ Don't worry. No awkward babbling this time :3 I'm just going to jump in. Blue Africa has covered this almost perfectly. I know it's easy to go over ...