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Ring, Ring. I grabbed my cell phone on my bed, flipped it open and with my, a cheerful tone (my, a cheerful? Shouldn't this be something like 'and with a ...

...Punctuation. I do a little poetry and have learned you get your head ripped off for no punctuation, or incorrect punctuation. I really liked this (mainly because of rhyming! I ...

Prologue “But, are you sure that there is absolutely nothing you can do for him?” “Positive, ma’am. I am deeply sorry, but the fever is incredibly high an’ won’t come ...

I woke with a start, in a cold sweat; I realized I was shaking violently. After calming my self down I glanced at the alarm clock next to my bed ...

Riley, Riley wake up. >This is dialogue, it needs quotations. All dialogue does. Different dialogue between different people need to become different paragraphs. Each time a new person speaks, make ...

I really liked this story...I'm normally not one for romantic stories, but this I really liked! It was well written, and engaging. I felt like I was trapped in the ...

First off, this should be rated at LEAST 12 years for swearing. I'd give it sixteen though. Anyway, interesting story, the only flaws were grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. It seems ...

I really liked your first one, full of details and it was beautifully written. I could easily see each thing happening. Until the final paragraph, I had no idea it ...

Capitalize first letter of a sentence:T he day was dark, and my eyes grew huge. T his was it. the beginning. we all sat in the gym, 10th through 13th ...

Overall, a great story! The beginning grabs you and, in my case, makes you read the rest. It was a sweet ending and, even in those few paragraphs, I made ...

Interesting story, I liked it. But I have a few issues: The children smiled as they gathered around their favorite grandpa, Grand Red, as he began to tell them a ...

(I'm not an amazing poet, so don't take my review too seriously!) Passion I haven’t written in a long time It’s been hard to feel the flow I haven’t written ...

I really liked this, (funny, it fits me almost word for word, but I got my braces off last year) but the rythm wasn't all there. Like: Like at Her ...