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Hey ayushinav, thanks for pointing out the areas of improvement. I assure you about the better formatting of poem from next time. Also the suggestions on the phrasing of the ...

Hey WinnyWriter, your observation coincides with my concern actually. The ambiguity in the punctuation and capitalization is the result of wrong formatting. My intentions were to make quatrain poem bu

Hi CaptainJack, you guessed it right about the formatting issue encountered while posting the piece on yws. I initially intended to have a quatrain, but the publishing centre seemed to ...

Thanks traves for your guidance to improve my story. i will definitely go through all my mistakes and also through the resources you provided to me. I assure you that ...

thanks GigiNicole17 for your suggestions on my work . I will definitely make sure that my next version of story will be far better than this one.

Thanks for your precious suggestions. These are very helpful for me to make my poetry better.

I will definitely jot down all of your suggestions in my poem.Thanks for helping.

Thanks for pointing out my loopholes.I will do my homework!

for my friend in here I have some suggestions in review!