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Thank you so much! Your feedback is really helpful, I'll definitely look into these things :)

Thank you for the review! I really appreciate the feedback :)

Thank you for your review!! I promise I'm not a psycho feminist :)

Nope you've covered everything in this piece and probably 3 future ones. Thanks again I really appreciate it:)

Yay! Thank you so much for your review :)

I seriously thinking of doing this, I really need and want to improve my writing :)

Yeah I'm pretty self conscious of this poem because I really don't want to com across as over aggressive - but I feel like changing the tone would result in ...

Thank you so much for your review! It was incredibly helpful :) Grammar is my weak point and so your critique is really appreciated. No it was not my intention ...

Thank you so much for your review! I will definitely apply these changes. The old couple's comment was intended to be a flashback but it obviously didn't come across this ...

Thank you for your review! :) One of my concerns was that my story was to confusing actually haha. I will definitely pay attention to these reviews! In case you're ...

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Hi!! I love this story! So descriptive and powerful but yet really beautiful... This review will be pretty short because I honestly don't have a lot to say :) Beautiful ...

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Hi!! I love this story! So descriptive and powerful but yet really beautiful... This review will be pretty short because I honestly don't have a lot to say :) Beautiful ...