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mckenya25

  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Nothing

    I really like the simplicity of this. This is something that bothers me too. I feel like depression, anorexia, anxiety, and just generally not liking people has gotten to be ...

    Apr 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: If I Had Wings

    I liked this poem a lot. There isn't really anything to correct you on, this is mostly just praise. The nice thing about poems is that you have so much ...

    Apr 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: An open invitation to my dad.

    This is really really good. I really have no complaints. I loved the writing style and your grammar and spelling is also very good. This is such a beautiful story ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Other » Humor, Fantasy Re: A Guide To Making A Seriously Powerful Voodoo Doll

    Hmmmm. Very interesting. I'm not sure whether to take this as a serious piece or as humorous. ;) I loved the notes though, those made me laugh. This is very ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Blink.

    Wow. I love this. I'm not quite good at this reviewing stuff yet, but I love this piece. You really opened up and its so interesting to me to hear ...

    Mar 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Literature Re: [Insert Creative Title Here]

    This is very clever. I think so much about cliche-ness of stories and movies. This is so spot on and funny. I liked it a lot, although my only complaint ...

    Mar 29, 2014


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein