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mckenya25

  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Nothing

    I really like the simplicity of this. This is something that bothers me too. I feel like depression, anorexia, anxiety, and just generally not liking people has gotten to be ...

    Sun Apr 06, 2014 10:52 pm
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: If I Had Wings

    I liked this poem a lot. There isn't really anything to correct you on, this is mostly just praise. The nice thing about poems is that you have so much ...

    Sun Apr 06, 2014 10:46 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: An open invitation to my dad.

    This is really really good. I really have no complaints. I loved the writing style and your grammar and spelling is also very good. This is such a beautiful story ...

    Wed Apr 02, 2014 3:56 am
  • Other » Humor, Fantasy Re: A Guide To Making A Seriously Powerful Voodoo Doll

    Hmmmm. Very interesting. I'm not sure whether to take this as a serious piece or as humorous. ;) I loved the notes though, those made me laugh. This is very ...

    Sun Mar 30, 2014 4:34 am
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Blink.

    Wow. I love this. I'm not quite good at this reviewing stuff yet, but I love this piece. You really opened up and its so interesting to me to hear ...

    Sat Mar 29, 2014 8:21 pm
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Literature Re: [Insert Creative Title Here]

    This is very clever. I think so much about cliche-ness of stories and movies. This is so spot on and funny. I liked it a lot, although my only complaint ...

    Sat Mar 29, 2014 8:04 pm


Do just once what others say you can't do, and you will never pay attention to their limitations again.
— James R. Cook