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I liked this alot! The only thing I could say that was negative isn't really negative at all. When you said "Or maybe it’s town" I think you mean "Or ...

Ok, I really like these lyrics! Great song, I could hear it in my head and everything. Not like, all the guitar/piano/instrumentals but the basic melody I could, but it's ...

Hi Raz! I'm somewhat new-ish on this site... At least, I haven't been on in quite some time! But anyways. Wow... I can totally hear this song! Good job! I ...

Yay! Villanelles! I had to write a villanelle in my creative writing class. I failed miserably. Anyways, this is quite a lovely poem here! I like the imagery and the ...

We haven't been introduced either, Navita... I'm Mcbeff... or MC, whichever :) Wow... I think this poem just blew me away a little bit! Like Lilymoore I read this poem ...

I couldn't find much wrong with this poem either, besides the grammatical error pointed out earlier. Good job, I really liked this poem.. and fear to pain again. This one ...

Good job, lots of emotion in this poem. Is it really to your sister? It definitely felt real reading it... I would have to agree with EAHailstone that the rhyming ...