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Mayyda Asif Bajwa

  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: Well, This is Awkward: Loud Singing

    Hey, let me review this. I found it interesting as i myself share every bit of interesting event or stupid mistake i make. As a writer criticizing yourself and laughing ...

    Apr 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Someone

    Hi, Just read your poem . Its in a good flow and i find it coming right from your heart as it is. This is both good and bad , ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Realistic Re: Me + You

    hey, I'd like to review this for you, nice lyrical poem, i must say. -Actually singing it with music might be different but here i find it bit mixed up ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Knowledge Is Power

    Hey Aley, I have to say the message entailed is worth a read, initially as i came up with the title it seemed bit old and boring. However the style ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Love Limbo

    Hello, It was nice going through your poem, found it short and sweet. I liked the use of commas, making meaning clearer and individual words more forceful. However few things ...

    Mar 31, 2013


How odd I can have all this inside me and to you it’s just words.
— David Foster Wallace