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Re: Well, This is Awkward: Loud Singing
Hey, let me review this. I found it interesting as i myself share every bit of interesting event or stupid mistake i make. As a writer criticizing yourself and laughing ...
Apr 1, 2013 -
Re: Someone
Hi, Just read your poem . Its in a good flow and i find it coming right from your heart as it is. This is both good and bad , ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Me + You
hey, I'd like to review this for you, nice lyrical poem, i must say. -Actually singing it with music might be different but here i find it bit mixed up ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Knowledge Is Power
Hey Aley, I have to say the message entailed is worth a read, initially as i came up with the title it seemed bit old and boring. However the style ...
Mar 31, 2013 -
Re: Love Limbo
Hello, It was nice going through your poem, found it short and sweet. I liked the use of commas, making meaning clearer and individual words more forceful. However few things ...
Mar 31, 2013
