matthewmazer

As Ronny was walking out of his blue tent, Skylar made confusion on when the schedule was due to camp Horizon. Camp Horizon was not just any camp It was ...

Sharp, teeth that were already dripping with my blood closed in on my arm and the pain made me want to scream bloddy murder. The teeth moved their way up ...

I had made an awful mess

The diner smells of death and brew. Usually when I see something this big I leave because of the length(I have a short attention span), but this sentence definitely got ...

Ima guess the point is that is that the person who is 'speaking' in the poem has had their friend abandon/leave them? If so then yes. 1)I really don't look ...

First off I wanted to say that I didn't find any grammaratical errors that(Im not the best with grammar however). Second thing is that the beginnig is pretty cool with ...

Second Chapter YAAAAAAAAAY! (Realy like your DF series). And like I said in my first review I like the idea of the people being trapped inside a game and it ...

I wants a cookie :-(. I like the humor you and your friends put into the story and I like how vlodermort and harry were acting kind of childish. There ...

Huuuuuge fan of the Percy Jackson series (I've read it all the way through a good two or three times). May is Luke's mom and the god youre talking about ...

I'll start off by saying I also like the L4D games, and me and my dad are huge zombie fans. The beginnin was pretty good to where the character thought ...

Saw this listed under the NEW and I decided to check it out. From this alone it sounds pretty interesting(cool names too). I made this same mistake when I first ...

I saw this on ths new list and it looked interesting from title. 1) Before you post something preview it, else you'll mess up on something like the paragraphs) their ...

Is this the format for one of those contests? I've got it on my watchlist but I dont think Ill submit it anything. As for the story itself its really ...

Saw this in the new stuff, and I need points, you need reviews. First off, I do it A LOT too so don't be worried, but what I'm talking about ...

Sorry I take so long to do the review, I'm making fun of myself with GIMP :-)! 1)The concept behind the story is really cool (human/dragon and human romance) 2)the ...