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Re: Currently Spazzing
This is the best thing I've ever read. I've felt this feeling over and over and over. It's very true. Also, the point of view is very interesting. It's not ...
Sep 8, 2015 -
Re: Dream Sequence 5/5
I do have to say, this was a little bit of a let down. I realize that it could possibly be that it's a dream, so you would wake up ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: Dream Sequence 2/5
You're delving into the mechanics of a human mind. Consciences really are fickle things. Let's see what's good and what's bad. The good For being based on a dream (which ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: The Boneyard
Wow. I'm a big fan of dystopian societies, but those take longer than just a short story to develop and have the reader understand how it works. In the short ...
Sep 4, 2015
