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Re: *Untitled* Chapter One (Title Suggestions Welcome!)
Thanks so much for the concrit! I can definitely see where you're coming from. I agree, it does seem a bit rushed. Taking this to heart! Again, thank you!
May 8, 2015 -
Re: A Viking Raid
This is such a great story! The plot twist caught me completely off guard, and the story as a whole flowed very smoothly.
May 8, 2015 -
Re: Sleeping Fox and Crying Bunny
I totally meant third line, sorry for the mistake!
May 8, 2015 -
Re: Sleeping Fox and Crying Bunny
Hi there! Ok, I love this poem! There's just one little thing that bugs me. (It might just be me...) The fourth line is longer than the others, and it ...
May 8, 2015 -
Re: Anamika Chapter 1: Unlocking the Door
Ok! Thanks for clearing things up! :)
May 5, 2015 -
Re: The Mind of an Analyst
I love this! I am a very analytical person myself, so this hits home for me. The only thing I would suggest would be to keep the candace a bit ...
May 4, 2015