maryanne

Hey there dbrick! :) FIRST OF ALL! the title totally caught my eye, good job :) It's unique. I still can't find the eleven words though if it's there at ...

Love it, Love it, Love it!!! First I thought that they would end up together but then you told me that he was a total jerk to her and hated ...

I love this! I'm just saying but I really liked how you added a bit more 'detail'. If you know what I mean :P Also, I liked how you explained ...

Hiya alilovessandy! I love the flow of your poem and it's great. I'm only new to this site so I can't really give useful feedback haha :P Nevertheless, this poem ...

I read it while I was in class and totally got immersed in your story that I totally forgot about my teacher who was talking, haha. The layout was amazing ...

Oh wow. Such powerful words, I actually love it! I love how you made it sound so realistic and emotional that you can just relate. :) ~Great Job! :D xo

Omg I love this. It just reminded me of my ex and how we used to be all lovey-dovey and never fight. Wow. :) Great poem. ~Keep making new ones ...

I love your title, it just drew me in to read your story :) After reading the first few sentences of your story I got confused. :/ Sorry I was ...

I liked your story :) Although some bits have to be improved, like if it's in present tense or past tense. It's good all in all :)