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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: The sad fate of the Vampire Aurelius

    Oh, hello Starleene, how are you? Now i guess it's my right to say that if you were not here to read and analyze properly the poem, you could've just ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: The sad fate of the Vampire Aurelius

    Hello Aley, thanks for reading and reviewing. I would like to propose you a challenge. Read it again with more open mind, forget these annoying structures and maybe you'll understand ...

    Jan 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Ballad No. 1

    Ha, my love, as always flattering and making me smile while i read your review. It was a quick random glimpse, and I put my own feelings in this one, ...

    Jan 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Ballad No. 1

    Wow, first of all I'm very flattered. Thank you very much for the compliments, it made me really glad to see that you really enjoyed and it was also a ...

    Jan 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Ballad No. 1

    Ah, thank you very much for reading and reviewing, Shearwater! Really nice you looked for the musical expressions and everything. I've learnt it during my piano classes, and added to ...

    Jan 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Ballad No. 1

    Hey Aley, thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed. Well, about the lack of climax, it's not supposed to have one. I considered using some erotic imagery ...

    Jan 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: The Emotional Education of a Vampire

    Oh, i don't even know how to thank you, my love. Thisproject would be nothing without all your support and help. Since the first words you've been there for me, ...

    Aug 10, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: The Emotional Education of a Vampire

    Hey Black Sheep! First: Of course i'll warn you! It's a pleasure to know that you're interested (: And, well about the name haha, i totally understand, it's what happened ...

    Aug 10, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: The Emotional Education of a Vampire

    Hey there! Thank you very much for the review! I wrote this prologue in a very random moment, and i still didn't edit, so it was really good to receive ...

    Aug 9, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: The Emotional Education of a Vampire

    Aw, thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed and i feel so flattered you "compared" him to Lestat, omg, you can't believe how it made me happy heheheh And yes, ...

    Aug 9, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: The Emotional Education of a Vampire

    Thank you very very much. Your review is really improtant to me, and i really appreciate that you pointed me all these details! I wrote this prologue a while ago ...

    Aug 9, 2012
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Half Asleep

    At the beggining I confess that the story seemed a bit confusing to me, lots of questions about who was that character, what was happening... But then, when you reveal ...

    Aug 8, 2012


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— Isabel Allende