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I like the poem part, but the rest is a little worrysome. Not everyone will feel the same way you do about what you write and that includes not understanding ...

When describing what the poem is about give more details. I like the simpliness of the poem, but if you are going to do something that simple write more/desrcibe more ...

I liked the script a few things though. Check your grammer and spelling. Also describe more of the surronding, more of who else is at the bar. Describe what type ...

I like it. Try to explain more of the students than of the teacher. It is hard to also see the setting. Try adding more people, but just as a ...

I was wondering if I could see more of your work. I like how you are taking a realistic spin to something that happens to girls everyday. Here is some ...

The beginning was ok. You need to show the setting and bring the charaters in a lot quicker. I was amazed at some of the detail, and I like it. ...

Great Job. I can see what you are saying. Try to add some sound though, it will help make it more real. If you can in the posting describe where ...