mariahneu

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I didn't really get all that interested in this. I found it dull. I thought the whole going-back-in-time thing corny. I feel that this would be better if the story ...

Okay, revised and, hopefully, ready. What do you think?

Okay, thanks, will do. :) Also appreciated the fact that you didn't severely bash my poem, but rather critiqued it in a nice manner - thank you for that as ...

Okay, cool, thanks. :)

There, what do you think of it now?

I actually did have writer's block when I wrote this; writer's block with this poem, and writer's block with an essay that I was writing at the time as well ...

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There, that's better. :) (Just changed it)

Thank You :)

Thank You :) Just revised it; now what do you think?

Ooh, definetly improved :) Your really good at description and imagery and all that jazz. :D x Oh, thank you so much. :D (I hope the re-writes get better.) :) ...

I just re-wrote it, adding a little surprise to the last 3 stanzas. :D (For some reason, I couldn't write about anything else, but stuff to do with the military; ...

This was good. I liked how the poem flowed, how the rhythm was original but almost familiar. This is, however, quite telly. You don't show us anything! The first line ...