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Re: Operation Imperial ch-10
Hi rishab! manisha here to review! I haven't read the previous chapters so if I say something silly or assume wrong please correct/ignore me. I'll review as I read. For ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Risk ch 8
Hiyya! Happy review day! manisha here to review for Green Lantern! I haven't read the previous chapters so if I say something silly or assume wrong please correct/ignore me. I'll ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Unbroken Part 1: Chapter Three
Driving with Dylan was interesting. It could just be me but I do not see how driving with Dylan is interesting. He seems to talk only to give directions and ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Unbroken Part 1: Chapter Two
Hello hello! manisha here again for chapter two. I'll review as I read. "Every night, Dylan used a spell and turned me into a fish so I couldn’t escape from ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Unbroken
Hi again! manisha here to review for green Lantern. Ah well, I really should have read the prologue first! Here it looks like Dylan is this good helpful person but ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The Golden Eagle Supremacy, Sands of Time: Chapter 2 - 3
Hi there! HAppy Review Day! manisha here to review for Team Green Lantern! Go Green Lantern! Why do I feel I have already reviewed the chapter 2? I'm really confused ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Unbroken Part 1: Chapter Four
Darling! You are my current favorite writer! WHOA again! This was another excellent chapter! Anger surged through my body, spreading like wildfire. I hated myself for liking how his life ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Unbroken Part 1: Chapter One
Hi there Writer! manisha here to review for review day! Go Green Lanterns! WOAH! Why didn't I read this before?! I'm so glad I decided to do it now! I ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Preventing The End Of The World iv
Hi reader! Happy review day! manisha here to review for Green Lantern! I've been following this story for some time now. I know you have good plot going here. However ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The Moon Spirit / Chapter Two
Hi! Happy Review day! When I saw this I went back to read chapter one. I'm here for chapter 2. As before, I'll review as I read. “You've my my ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The Moon Spirit Chapter One
Heyya! Happy review day to you! manisha here to review for team Green Lantern! I'll review as I read - Suddenly, I felt like I was be closely watched. Be ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The GES, Sands of Time: Chapter 2, Part 2
Hi again! I'll review as I read! He never saw Regina’s eye contact; her look was to the distant campus interiors. I am not sure what you mean by this. ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The GES, Sands of Time, Chapter 2, Part 1
Hi! Happy review day to you! manisha here to review for Green Lanterns! I'll review this as I read. Murmers of thunder leaked in as he struggled to get up ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The GES, Sands of Time, Chapter 1
Hi Aquila! Happy Review Day to you! manisha here to review! I like the way you started this. You try to give us an image of the place the story ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 1:
?Hi Serene! Happy review day! manisha here to review! As this is kinda long I'll review as I read. Though, it's the man that must of caught Cent's eye. 'must ...
Aug 25, 2013
