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Re: The Beginning((prologue rewrite))
Thanks everyone for the advice. I'll try to work on it some more, but it'll be a while before I can actually post anything more. I'm buisy with school and ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: Pure Chapter 1
Yeah I agree with OrangeNailPolish also. And I think the story was good, though it would be better if there was more description in it. Well keep it up!! ~Mandy~
May 16, 2008 -
Re: The Beginning ((part one of prologue))
Thanks for all the advice you guys, I'll try my best. I'm working on this story. I dropped it when I was about eleven or twelve, but you guys have ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: When Last I Saw the Fisher
Beautiful!!
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Pure Prolouge
I like this story, but like the others, i agree that it needs some rearranging. Great story!! Keep it up.
May 14, 2008