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Thank you! I like your version a bit better.

Hey, this is really good! I liked it, and I can't wait for the next part of the story to come out!

I noticed a few errors involving marks. That's about it, though. I liked the story a lot, and it's a good short story!

I like the story, although I'm pretty sure that it's about Nick Jonas and Selena Gomez, and I don't love that part too much. Everything else is awesome. Keep it ...

Hey, I really like this story! I plan to keep on reading it! But, I have a question. Is this the story of Selena Gomez and Nick Jonas from the ...

Yeah, this was mainly for fun and humor, I'll look into it more.

Galerius, thank you for your constructive criticism, and I'll keep it in mind. But, I don't understand. If you know it's supposed to be a random and non-logical poem, then ...

Thanks!

Nice poem! Very good comparison on how celebrities get trashed. Nice job!

Wow! Very depressing! But ... very good. I liked it. It was a good short story. Only a few typos here and there, but otherwise it was very good. Nice ...