madel

i really love your poem.. although i agree a little with jesica... but i admira the wayyou write your poem you did well in this one keep it up i ...

i think i agree with KNS012....... you have nice choice of words which made the whole poem so AWESOME!!! you may have a little problem with some of the lines ...

bravo!!great!!!nice... awesome..A+ :D i like your POEM ..no,,,, i love it.. HOW DID YOU DO THAT? can i ask some tips from you on how to write a poem like ...

hi there...madel here' i love writing poems too but i am not good with the way i have read your title and been intrigued so i decided to read this ...

your so great!!!!!i was like WHOA!!!!! how did you do that?so awesome!!! i love writing poems too the only problem is that everytime i write a poem it always sucks...i ...

i think the message that you want to implement in this poem is great,,,, the only problem is that you are having hard time in how you construct each lines...i ...

i think you should minimize the repetition of word it made the poem too lousy... :wink: anyway i love snow that is why i have been intrigued to read this..... ...

hi there i know that this is your first poem and that you dont want to be criticize,but i really think that there is no chronological order in your poem ...

hmm..i like your poem i envy the way you construct each line but the first time i read this i feel that there is something missing i just dont know ...