madam-butterfly

i guess you're right, once you read it it's a pretty sucky poem. i don't have any real poetic talent, because i can only write what i'm feeling i guess ...

I know I’m not far but I know I’m not here I finish this with the start that's supposed to be two seperate lines! :oops: :oops:

i've edited the poem and am reposting it as Opposite of Life(revised). please reread it and leave feedback! com'on i'm begging!

thank you everyone! i want you to know that i really appreciate all the feedback!

153. when ever he asks a question raise your hand hand and reply "i have nothing to say" very loudly! lol, these were freaking hilarious! but the truth of is ...