mackenzie

Flower~Child: I have been broken a lot, I think in this part that you have contradicted yourself. You say that nobody See's your tears, and yet when you are broken ...

I would like to say thank you to all of you for all of the positive feed back for this poem! I am quite happy with how it turned out, ...

KatTrain: I would to congratulate you by saying that you have given the most critiques of any poem I have posted, thanks! I agree with the detail. I should review ...

Quetseli: I will agree the inside story is quite challenging, but it was suppose to be a form of computer virus. It's hinted at the end with the program bit. ...

Quetseli: Thank you so much! :D

Forestqueen808: Thank you so much! I was really worried about being ripped apart with this being my first poem posted. I agree with what you said, and I will do ...