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Re: Thoughts of a Call-Girl
Amazing. You're unabashedly adressing a subject that some even have trouble thinking about. You're diving right into it. I really like the seperation and the rythym. Though I don't entirely ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Reach For The Sky
Dear KAH, I really like the theme with this one. Again, just a couple of spelling errors. I know sometimes your mind is too fast for your pencil (well, in ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: never to believe
I liked this. It really captured the hatred you feel. They were some pretty strong, raw feelings. You usually don't get a lot of emotion from a short poem, but ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: My Pencil
Awesomeness, which my spell check says is a word! Yay, which it says isn't a word. What's up with that? I really like the poem. It's good to know that ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Smile
I really liked this. It reminds me of when I'm trying to cheer someone up and end up making it worse. I hate it when I'm in a position where ...
Sep 12, 2010
