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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Thoughts of a Call-Girl

    Amazing. You're unabashedly adressing a subject that some even have trouble thinking about. You're diving right into it. I really like the seperation and the rythym. Though I don't entirely ...

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Reach For The Sky

    Dear KAH, I really like the theme with this one. Again, just a couple of spelling errors. I know sometimes your mind is too fast for your pencil (well, in ...

    Sep 26, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: never to believe

    I liked this. It really captured the hatred you feel. They were some pretty strong, raw feelings. You usually don't get a lot of emotion from a short poem, but ...

    Sep 12, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Pencil

    Awesomeness, which my spell check says is a word! Yay, which it says isn't a word. What's up with that? I really like the poem. It's good to know that ...

    Sep 12, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Smile

    I really liked this. It reminds me of when I'm trying to cheer someone up and end up making it worse. I hate it when I'm in a position where ...

    Sep 12, 2010


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