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I haven't read the first chapter of BD, but I've heard so much about it I might as well have.

Ooh, mysterious. :D I've never actually read any Dean Koontz books. I guess I'm just not a huge fan of mysteries. Not sure way. Maybe I'll check it out.

I have no idea what you guys are talking about with the hints about the third book, lol. Apparently I'm out of the Paolini loop. :D

Haha, great - I'll be facing a four hour plane ride here in two weeks. :D I will most definitely check it out then. It's on hold for me at ...

Yay for the redemption of Stephenie Meyer. :D Angels will celebrate the day when Stella and I forgave her, lol.

Again, I'm only going to critique storyline things. Chapter 3...please tell me if it's awful or not!!! ***** Looking out a door and seeing something that doesn’t exist is one ...

Chapter 2 Um, I think everyone else got the detailed critique. I just have one comment about the storyline. Why would Alicia immediately think that the boy was a sprite? ...

hahaha! Very nice, very nice. Great job. Everyone else found the mistakes I saw, so yeah. Very well done.

Arhosfeydd We slept that night at another inn. This one was bigger and cleaner, but after what had happened at the last inn, Quennel wasn’t ready to entrust his hybrid ...

*glares* You are out to make the rest of us feel uber un-talented, aren't you? Again, second chapter was great. *sigh* *goes off to edit sucky novella*

Hey! Everybody else got the nit-picks, so I'll just say...I really like this! The little suggestions of something surreal about Isaac really added to it... "His eyes are turning," that ...

Hello! There's already a thread about the Host, take a look down the page a little. :D

Yeah, definitely. It felt so much more realistic than Twilight. The characters were very real and relatable this time around, and they actually MADE MISTAKES. *gasp, swoon* It was very ...

It's Fang! Wow, that would be weird.

Ooh, sounds cool. :D