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  • Script » General, General Re: Halloween with Snoink, Grif, Edward Cullen, and Bulbasaur

    I just cried from laughing so hard. That has never happened before. *dies of laughter*

    Oct 24, 2008
  • Other » General, General Re: My query letter

    So, I re-vamped my query letter. I like it a little better now: Attn. Awesome Agent Person: What would you do if your worst nightmare was the only thing that ...

    Oct 23, 2008
  • Other » General, General Re: My query letter

    No, it's not posted. I took it off the internet a while back because I didn't want to ruin my chances of getting it published. But I'll probably email it ...

    Oct 9, 2008
  • Other » General, General Re: My query letter

    Only one suggestion: replace 'Dear Agent' with the agents actual name. Thanks Sureal. I plan to, I just didn't want to post the agent's name on YWS - it seemed ...

    Oct 7, 2008
  • Other » General, General Re: Synopsis for Gypsie Eyes

    Ah, alright. Yes, I'm still in the process of writing my first query synopses, so I haven't had to write the long one yet. Well, good luck yet again! Keep ...

    Aug 12, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Scavenger

    Awesome, awesome, awesome. Sheesh. That was exciting. I love the little extra glimpses you get of Raven's personality...not just her snarkiness, but also her wildness and her loyalty. It's great. ...

    Aug 7, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Scavenger

    I didn't see your most recent chapter until after I posted my review. I'm sorry. But I enjoyed reading it so much that I didn't want to give an in-depth ...

    Aug 6, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: What's the weirdest book you've ever read?

    "Mirror, Mirror" was very, very weird. And disturbing.

    Jul 27, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Brisingr (Eragon 3) Spoiler

    makes you think... WHY do authors get published and yet better ones get passed over? Paolini got his self-published. His parents, in actual fact. A publisher then took him after ...

    Jul 27, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: 'To Kill a Mockingbird'

    Ugh, I hated Old Man and The Sea. Personally, I think Jane Eyre is a lot more dull than TKAM - Harper Lee's writing is simpler in my mind, easier ...

    Jul 22, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Gypsie Eyes: chapter five

    I, personally, am still a little confused about the gull. *blushes* Was Tannar the gul or did Tannar send the gull?

    Jul 22, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse

    There's a thread for The Host I think...a much better book than Twilight, in my opinion.

    Jul 22, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse

    Jacob pwns the whole book series. I am going to watch the Twilight move solely for the werewolves. :)

    Jul 21, 2008
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: A Siren's Voicebox

    *feels inferior after gyr's magnificent crit* Um...yeah, what she said.

    Jul 20, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Hold the Phone

    Hmm, maybe I'll do one from Owen's perspective or somethng. I don't know. We'll see. :D Right now I'm stressing about college and stuff, so I haven't been writing at ...

    Jul 10, 2008


You can't choose your parentage. But you can choose your legacy.
— Rick Riordan, The Blood of Olympus